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Igneus Porta; A mildy gothic steampunk fantasy story
Topic Started: Aug 29 2008, 07:17 AM (40 Views)
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Okay, well, originally my steam punk story was going to be a detective story, but I realised that I suck at detective stories and can only write them when they are full of cliches... So, I completely restarted, and completely edited the entire world of the story, the genre, the characters and... well.. everything.

And so, here is my new attempt at a steampunk story, although in the first chapter it isn't obvious that it is a steam punk story. It is also rather gothic in some of its content, and it is most definitely a fantasy!

Any comments and critique that can help me improve the current chapter or any future ones will be much appreciated! Anyways, without further ado;

Igneus Porta
Chapter 1
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